An interesting feature of this play’s construction is the playwright’s use of a certain piece of punctuation:
“I have made unconventional use of certain punctuation marks in the script. Often a line of
dialogue will consist of a simple colon ( : ). My intention here is twofold: to shape the scene
rhythmically using silence, and to indicate a specific quality of that silence, namely watchfulness.”
These silences have presented a delicious challenge in the rehearsal room. First of all, they are challenging for an actor to deliver with specificity and intent. Many acting questions arise from this challenge. Are the (:) functioning as silent lines, beats, or pauses? Can they be a combination of all three? How does an actor differentiate between these choices without the use of words or demonstrative gesture? How can the director effectively assist the actors in discovering the best way to handle these (:) while still allowing the text to reveal its true structure naturally and with ease?
One thing that I will say, when the actors fully observe and explore these moments of silent “watchfulness”, the result is both breath taking and expansive. As a director and as an audience member, I feel privileged in sharing the carefully suspended silence between two people who feel deeply and strongly. But the work isn’t over, each (:) presents a new puzzle in the rehearsal room, and we are still discovering the key to their theatrical value.
